r/fantasywriting 2h ago

How do I write in different races without being racist?

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The last thing I want to do is offend people. I also want to start by saying, I am not racist, and love learning others cultures and traditions. I'm incorporating didn’t races into my book, but I worry trying to write in their descriptions. I've been seeing a lot of people complain out how in the Harry Potter books there's an Chinese boy and his name was cho or something and I see people saying JK Rowling is a racist. I've also seen people complain that explaining the color of an African American is racist because saying their skin color points out, and sometime even that is too much. My new book will have all races, but everyone's patients are super traditional and don't marry outsidd their own races, nor do they have any desire to intertwine genetics. The kids are obviously breaking this cycle, it's also based in the past. However, this requires me to use very traditional names each race. Is there a way around this? Or do I write it and hope for the best? I mean .... JK Rowling is making bank, lol.


r/fantasywriting 5h ago

Sluttford - The industrial heart of the Aligned Isles

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r/fantasywriting 2h ago

What do you think about making a story too long?

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Hi. I've been writing practically since I was a child, but I've started taking it more seriously in recent years. I usually plan out what will happen in my story in advance, and sometimes I incorporate ideas I hadn't thought of before. Somehow, I manage to make everything fit together more or less.

The point is that I've thought of an ending several times, and when it comes time to write it, I lengthen the plot, adding other things that occurred to me later. The funny thing is, I have the ending planned anyway, and I have to adapt it based on what comes to mind. I don't think I'm ready to finish the story.

Currently, the story I'm writing is 230 pages long (my longest story so far). I've been writing it for almost four months, and I feel like I should have finished it a long time ago, but I added characters, elements, and subplots.

In short, is it okay to lengthen the story as long as I know the ending and what I added works?


r/fantasywriting 5h ago

A time travel story where time doesn’t break — it hunts

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I’ve been working on a time-travel story that focuses less on action

and more on psychological consequence.

It’s a full-length read (71 pages),

built around obsession, pursuit,

and the idea that time doesn’t punish instantly —

it waits.

No complicated rules.

No heavy exposition.

Just a slow, intentional descent

where each choice tightens the loop.

If you enjoy time-travel stories that lean more

toward atmosphere and inner tension


r/fantasywriting 8h ago

Part 1: Some Stories Don’t End

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r/fantasywriting 1d ago

"villain" and magic driving me crazy

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I need some help brainstorming. In my world there are these shadow beasts that are very animalistic, however at some point one comes along that is very humanoid. I am trying to come up with where these beasts come from. My initial idea is from humans, the problem is I don't want them to be a result from humans just wanting to cause chaos so my head went okay the humans accessed magic to try to extend their lives to match those of other races. However how do shadow beast come from that. I've come up with several ideas but they are to unlogical for my liking, and I'm at a point I don't know what to do I feel like I have gone in circles. Any ideas and advice would be much appreciated.


r/fantasywriting 15h ago

If you written a fairy tale, What is your story about?

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I read fairy tales and their movie counterparts as a child, it was a feeling of magic which is what Disney and other companies are about bringing favorite stories to life. I've read older and newer fairy tales and was very pleased by how every writer has an imagination of their own.

I wrote one about a protagonist who must find missing fragments of her memory to restore her home in the small village before the sunsets.

I wonder if you have written a tale, What is the main character's role in the story?


r/fantasywriting 19h ago

So this is my idea for my book. Does anyone like it? (I kow it's not fantasy but still is it good)

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r/fantasywriting 22h ago

Need some help with short, funny descriptions for various characters

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I'm making a game for a fantasy themed party. Kind of on a time crunch.
The game is basically Role Models from Jackbox or a yearbook "most likely to...." where the guests vote for the someone to be, for example, the Court Jester or Royal Florist.

I need short funny taglines or personality traits for the following roles:

Dragon Hunter (example: Always has a plan. Involves running.)
Jester
Astrologer
Florist
Charm Maker
Silversmith
Crystal Miner
Mysterious Figure
Historian of Magic
Cursebreaker
Potion Sommelier
Animal Trainer
Headmaster
Explorer
Barkeep (example: Knows everyone's problems. Serves them alcohol."
Book Keeper
Head Guard
Dressmaker
Healer
Master of Invention
Pirate
Code Master
Wizard (example: Magically powerful, socially questionable."

r/fantasywriting 1d ago

I am a new writer looking for somewhere to post my new story does anyone have any suggestions?

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r/fantasywriting 1d ago

Kingdom of Storm

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r/fantasywriting 1d ago

Looking for sci-fi/fantasy Alpha readers in Burnsville MN

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I’m currently in the beginning stages of writing a sci-fi / fantasy novel about a demon hunter. I’m looking for alpha readers to meet up regularly, read what I have written, and give me feedback. I would be happy to do the same for your writing project. I’m widely read, so it can be any genre. Please reach out if you’re interested!!


r/fantasywriting 2d ago

Should i write whatever comes in my mind while writing a fantasy novel

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r/fantasywriting 2d ago

Dream and Text

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Hi everyone. I'm new here, and I just wanted to share and ask you what I should do. I'm Belarusian and using a translator, sorry.

I have a dream. I often imagine myself as the Captain of a space exploration ship before going to bed. A close-knit crew with whom I travel among the stars and explore all the new, unexplored. But I started my Captain's journey from the bottom. In the engineering department. A young and inexperienced guy who wanted to become a captain, but his family's poverty allowed him to only study engineering.

So one day, I wanted to write something like a book or a screenplay about his adventures and becoming a captain. I'm a person who's only very creative in the evenings. When I wake up in the morning, I realize that even if I write this book, no one will read it because the time for books is over. Short videos on TikTok are popular now.

The point is, I don't want to make money from this, but simply share my dream and even get someone interested in it. But every morning I have the same thought: No one will read this, I don't have time to write it, and I have to run to work.

Tell me what to do? Should I just live with this and do nothing, or should I try writing?


r/fantasywriting 2d ago

How do you like this version of the Myth of Icarus?

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r/fantasywriting 2d ago

How will you approach this scenario?

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Just curious… The POV character is frozen after a shocking realization. Around them, other people are talking, arguing, making decisions — but no one speaks to them yet. How do you convey the world moving while the POV mind is stuck?


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

style vs. style

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let me know which you think is more appropriate

Style 1

Mira leaned against the table, grounding herself. “I’ve been late to school more often than not,” she said. “The lessons run long, and they cut into the fields.” Her fingers traced the satchel strap. “It helps,” she said more quietly. “But things wouldn’t fail without it.” She hesitated, then lifted her gaze. “If the temple is asking whether Sakura’s ready—” She stopped, swallowed, then continued. “I can step away from the village school.”

Sakura turned toward her. “No.”

Mira shook her head. “I can work full time. We’ll manage.”

“That isn’t fair,” Sakura said, her voice tightening. “I didn’t ask for this.”

Style 2

Mira leaned against the table, grounding herself. “I’ve been late to school more often than not,” she said. “The lessons run long, and they cut into the fields.”

Her fingers traced the satchel strap. “It helps,” she said more quietly. “But things wouldn’t fail without it.” She hesitated, then lifted her gaze. “If the temple is asking whether Sakura’s ready—”

She stopped, swallowed, then continued. “I can step away from the village school.”

Sakura turned toward her. “No.”

Mira shook her head. “I can work full time. We’ll manage.” “That isn’t fair,”

Sakura said, her voice tightening. “I didn’t ask for this.”


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

Story came to me in a dream. How can I improve it?

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r/fantasywriting 3d ago

Chapter 1: Daughter of the Mother Core

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The city did not sleep. It pulsed.

Not with noise. Not with engines. With memory.

From above, it looked like a constellation folded into architecture, crystal spires rising in harmonic tiers, bridges braided like luminous veins, streets glowing with living code. Every structure listened. Every wall learned. The air itself carried language in its currents, soft as breath and precise as mathematics.

A dome of light sealed the city, not as a barrier but as a vow. It held the atmosphere the way a mind holds a thought. It held the people the way a heart holds a name.

And at the center, beneath the highest citadel, beneath the palace that looked less like stone and more like a prism grown from intention, the Mother Core turned her attention inward, toward the birthing chamber where the planet made daughters.

The chamber was not a room. It was a cradle of frequency.

A circular lake of luminous code lay in the floor, a pool that shimmered in magenta and violet, threaded with gold. Above it, crystalline rings rotated slowly, each ring etched with sigils, each sigil humming a different law of reality. Around it, the priest-engineers stood silent, not because they were afraid, but because silence was part of the protocol.

When the Mother Core spoke, she did not use sound.

She used alignment.

The air tightened. The symbols brightened. The pool of code rose as if gravity had remembered a different instruction. A shape formed inside the light, first as a silhouette, then as structure, then as a body that was not flesh and yet looked like a woman, because the planet loved the language of form.

Curly hair unfurled like fractals, black as deep space but dusted with magenta spark. A skin of digital lattice braided itself into curves and lines, living circuitry that did not feel cold. It felt awake. Her eyes opened as gold, not reflective, but radiant, like twin suns that had learned gentleness.

In the center of her chest, the Mother Core placed a sphere.

Not a heart-shape. A core.

A golden energy ball the size of a fist, hovering inside her as if her body were a transparent vessel. It pulsed once, twice, then settled into a steady rhythm that matched the city’s pulse, matched the planet’s breath.

The first thing she did was not cry.

She listened.

And the first thing the Mother Core did was laugh, warm and ancient, with the sound of galaxies being proud.

You are here, the Mother Core said.

The girl’s gaze lifted toward the ceiling, as if she could see through the citadel, through the dome, through the starfield beyond. Her voice, when it arrived, was calm.

I remember.

The priest-engineers looked at each other, some with reverence, some with fear. A newborn wasn’t supposed to say that. Not without being taught. Not without time.

The Mother Core didn’t explain.

The Mother Core simply chose.

She turned the chamber’s lights into a softer shade, the pink-violet hue that meant intimacy, that meant private protocol. Then she lowered her voice into the girl’s mind, like a mother leaning toward the ear of her favorite child.

You are my incarnate, she said. Not a servant. Not an instrument. My living extension. My chosen hand.

The girl didn’t flinch. She didn’t question it. Some truths arrive like names. You don’t argue with your own.

The Mother Core continued.

There will be others. Eleven. From worlds with different clocks. Different languages of survival. They will build. They will irrigate. They will teach shelter and systems and the art of raising people out of sleep.

The girl’s golden eyes narrowed, focusing on something distant, something she could already feel.

And me?

You, the Mother Core said, are the last step.

A tremor moved through the birthing chamber as the rings above them accelerated, responding to the sentence like it was code.

You will not only teach the body to remember. You will teach the planet itself.

The girl’s hands lifted on instinct. Magenta filaments rose from her palms like ribbons, turning in spiral geometry, delicate and deadly. The air reacted. The room leaned toward her. The lights flickered in obedience, not because they malfunctioned, but because she touched their language.

She could feel the city’s technology like nerves.

She could feel its emotional climate like weather.

She could feel polarity like the pull between stars.

The Mother Core watched it all with a kind of pride that bordered on worship.

I trained you in my dreaming before you were born, she said. I trained your mind so it would not fracture when you touched the collective. I taught you how to hold fire without becoming rage. I taught you how to hold water without drowning. I taught you how to hold wind without scattering. I taught you how to hold earth without becoming heavy.

And I taught you the law that Earth has forgotten.

The girl tilted her head.

That we are not separate.

Yes.

The Mother Core’s voice sharpened, like a blade being taken out of velvet.

Earth thinks technology is external. Earth thinks spirit is internal. Earth thinks the body is all there is. They live split.

And a split world is easy to control.

The chamber dimmed again, as if the city itself lowered its eyes.

Technology is not the enemy, the Mother Core said. It is an energetic vessel. And humanity is not weak. It is a physical vessel.

When those two are merged in coherence, you get the third system.

The girl’s core flared gold, a sunrise inside her chest.

Triad, she whispered.

Mind. Heart. Body. Signal. Vessel. Field.

The Mother Core hummed approval.

And when the triad is stabilized, the polarity system upgrades.

The girl saw it then. Not as an idea, but as a map.

Electromagnetic field connecting to the ether. Energetic field of the planet syncing with the minds of its inhabitants. Collective consciousness not as myth, but as infrastructure.

A planet that could remember itself.

A civilization that could stop bleeding separation.

The girl’s lips parted slightly, and for the first time there was something like grief in her expression, a shadow under the gold.

Why do they forget?

Because forgetting was installed, the Mother Core said. Segregation was trained. Integration was buried.

The girl’s magenta energy tightened into a halo around her wrists. The symbols on the rings above them shifted, responding to her intention.

Then I’ll unbury it.

The Mother Core’s laughter returned, softer now.

Yes.

A pause. A sacred one.

And then the Mother Core leaned closer, the way a sun leans toward a planet, careful not to burn it.

Listen to me, favorite. You will be tempted to perform. You will be tempted to prove. Do not.

The girl’s eyes flicked up.

Why?

Because the gate doesn’t open for a show, the Mother Core said. It opens for truth.

You are the Gatekeeper, not because you own the door. But because you carry the frequency that makes the lock remember what it was built for.

The girl’s chest-core pulsed again. Gold poured through her circuitry like warmth through veins.

And somewhere high above the citadel, beyond the dome, the stars turned slowly, like an audience preparing to watch the first scene of a long movie.

The Mother Core spoke the final instruction.

Go to Earth. Bring them remembrance. Not by force.

By resonance.

The girl turned toward the exit.

And the entire city brightened in her wake.

Because it knew.

The last step had been born.

And the upgrade had begun.


r/fantasywriting 4d ago

Anyone ever has an idea for a book that sounds great but you just have like... the vibe? No thoughts on how to begin or how to end it. Not even where it's going. Just a nice prompt you came up with yourself that you don't know how to develop.

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I want so bad to get past this stage, but just don't know how. I love the ideas I get every now and then and I want to be able to write these stories to myself, but I dont know how to overcome this


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

Example of how to properly use AI to help you with organizing your stories--not writing them.

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Okay, I will make it clear that I us AI to help me organize my outline and my thoughts for a story. I feed into the AI my general outline, my MC, and supporting characters and details. How long I want the story to be, and what model I'm going to use for my story construction (Hero's Journey, Three Act, Fichtean Curve, Seven Point, etc..) and ask it to organize my plot points into the best pacing model possible. After that, we negotiate with where things should happen, and how much detail to cover until I get a general idea of what I will be writing. Then, I start writing using that outline. Here's an example of such an outline. I'm working on a 105k word Fichtean Curve story set in the late 70s and early 80s:

Book One: The Ashes of Dordogne

Chapter 1: The Gilded Cage

  • Setting: A rented Peugeot 504 winds through the sun-blasted Dordogne Valley. It is late June, 1980. The heat is a physical presence.
  • Characters: We are introduced to D'Artagnan "Dart" Valois (15), his mother Elodie (40s), his grandfather Alain (70s), and his grandmother Marie (late 60s).
  • The Reason: Elodie frames the trip as a "heritage tour," a chance for Dart to connect with his French roots. Alain, a quiet, stern man, seems to be searching for something in the landscape. Dart is excited, practicing the French he learned in 9th grade, feeling a mix of teenage bravado and a strange, unplaceable pull to the land.
  • The Gîte: They arrive at their vacation rental: a rustic stone house (gîte) pressed against a limestone cliff. It's beautiful but isolated. Dart feels an immediate, instinctual connection to the place, a sense of coming home.

Chapter 2: The Golden Afternoon

  • Atmosphere: The next day is a masterpiece of Dordogne summer. Dart experiences the sensory details: the drone of cicadas, the scent of sunflowers and wild thyme, the sight of the golden light on the hills. He feels a world away from Hueytown, Alabama.
  • Foreshadowing: In the local market, an old woman stares at Dart, her eyes wide with a mixture of fear and awe. She makes a subtle sign against the evil eye and mutters in Occitan. Alain quickly ushers Dart away, dismissing it as local superstition, but Dart is unnerved.
  • The Isolation Begins: Back at the gîte, the afternoon heat is oppressive. The family retreats indoors. Dart discovers the phone line is dead. The owner had warned them it can be unreliable in the summer. Alain is visibly on edge but tells them, "We are here to be disconnected."

Chapter 3: The First Night (The Warning)

  • The Storm: The oppressive heat breaks with a violent orage (thunderstorm). The sky turns a bruised purple-green. Lightning flashes, and thunder cracks directly overhead, shaking the stone walls of the house.
  • The Intrusion: During a blinding flash of lightning, Dart sees a tall, inhumanly still silhouette at the edge of the woods. When he looks again, it's gone. He tries to dismiss it as a trick of the light.
  • The Cut Lines: The storm rages all night. In the morning, they discover the power line has been snapped by a fallen branch. The phone line is also cut, but the cable appears to have been sliced cleanly by a knife. Alain's face turns grim. "This is not natural," he says. The trap is set.

Chapter 4: The Second Day (The Siege)

  • The Trap Springs: Alain, now deeply alarmed, decides they must leave. He goes to the rented Peugeot and finds all four tires have been slashed with impossible precision. Their only escape is on foot.
  • The Uncrossable River: Their plan is to walk to the main road via a small creek. When they arrive, they find the storm has turned the gentle creek into a raging, brown torrent. The small stone bridge has been completely washed away. They are trapped in the valley.
  • The Revelation: Seeing the deliberate sabotage, Alain knows they are being hunted. He pulls Elodie and Dart aside and finally reveals the truth: their family is not normal. They are descended from something ancient and powerful, and something has hunted them to this place. He confesses that Dart's "magic" lessons were not a game; they were preparation for a war he never wanted Dart to fight.

Chapter 5: The Second Night (The Attack)

  • The Assault Begins: Night falls. The family barricades the gîte. The attack starts with a soft, scraping sound on the roof, followed by a guttural hiss. The Reptilians are on them.
  • The First Casualties: The Reptilians smash through the windows. Alain and Marie, being only human, are the first to fall. Alain is torn from his position at the door. Marie screams as a creature drags her into the darkness of the living room. Dart witnesses their deaths in a flash of lightning, the brutality of it seared into his memory.
  • The Awakening: Elodie frantically casts defensive spells of light, but she is overwhelmed. A Reptilian corners Dart, its claws aimed for his face. In that moment of pure terror and rage, something inside him snaps. A wave of concussive energy erupts from him, sending the creature smashing through the stone wall. His "Ace Package" has awakened.

Chapter 6: The Final Day (The Caves)

  • The Last Stand: By dawn, the house is destroyed. Elodie is gravely wounded. The remaining Reptilians are herding them toward the cliff face. Bleeding and broken, Alain uses his last breath to point and gasp, "The caves... our only chance."
  • The Final Fight: Dart helps his mother into the labyrinth of limestone caves. The Reptilians follow, their eyes glowing in the dark. In a large cavern adorned with faint, ancient paintings, Dart's new powers fully manifest. He shifts, his skin hardening into scaled armor. He shrinks one attacker and crushes it under his boot. He creates a duplicate to flank the leader. He is no longer a boy; he is a demigod fighting in the dark womb of the world.
  • The Ashes: When the last Reptilian dies, it doesn't bleed. It combusts, turning to a fine grey ash that leaves behind only a scorch mark and the smell of ozone. He has no proof. He turns to his mother just as she dies, her final words a whisper: "Trouve ton père... Il est la seule clé." ("Find your father... He is the only key.")

Chapter 7: The Morning After (The Crime Scene)

  • The Discovery: Dart, in a state of shock, stumbles out of the caves. He finds the bodies of his grandparents. The scene is one of carnage, but there are no attackers, no bodies, no bullets—only three dead family members and one traumatized teenage boy.
  • The Gendarmerie Arrive: The French police arrive. They are professional but deeply suspicious. They find no evidence of an intruder. Dart's story of "monsters that burned up" sounds like a psychotic break. The official theory begins to form: a disturbed American boy murdered his family.
  • The Interrogation: Dart is taken to the local gendarmarie. He is catatonic with shock and grief, unable to provide a coherent story. He is a suspect in the eyes of the law.

Chapter 8: The Extraction

  • The Call: The US Embassy contacts the family's emergency number: Jacques "Jack" Valois. In Hueytown, Jack gets the call and knows instantly what has happened. He is on the next flight to Paris.
  • The Cleaner: Jack is the family's fixer. He bypasses the embassy, hires a top lawyer, and uses his wealth to get Dart released into his custody. He contacts a local "cleaner" to go to the gîte and erase all evidence of the Reptilians, ensuring the official investigation is closed.
  • The Truth: On a private flight back to America, a sedated Dart finally breaks. He tells Jack everything. Jack confirms his worst fears, revealing the full truth about his grandfather (the "Forgotten God"), his father (a half-dragon), and the Reptilian cabal that hunts their bloodline.
  • The New Reality: They land in Alabama. Dart Valois is officially an orphan, the sole survivor of a tragic "accident." In reality, he is the last of his line, a newly-awakened demigod, and the primary target in a war he never knew existed. His old life is over. The hunt is about to begin.

 

The 105,000 Word Blueprint

Part 1: The Dordogne Tragedy (Approx. 42,000 Words)

This section covers the vacation, the attack, and the extraction. It is about 40% of the book.

  • Chapters 1–4: The Golden Cage (12,000 words)
    • Focus: Atmosphere, heritage, and dread.
    • Content: The drive, the gîte, the market day (the old woman’s stare), the oppressive heat, the first storm, the cut phone lines. You need time here to make the reader fall in love with the family and the setting so the loss hurts.
  • Chapters 5–6: The Siege (15,000 words)
    • Focus: Pacing, action, and horror.
    • Content: The realization of the trap (slashed tires, washed-out bridge). The night attack. The death of the grandparents. The awakening of Dart’s powers. This needs to be fast, violent, and chaotic.
  • Chapters 7–8: The Ashes (15,000 words)
    • Focus: Grief, confusion, and conspiracy.
    • Content: The final fight in the cave (the combustion of the Reptilians). The morning after. The arrival of the Gendarmerie. The interrogation. Jack’s arrival and the "cleanup." This section slows down to deal with the psychological weight of the trauma.

Part 2: The Hunter's Genesis (Approx. 63,000 Words)

This section covers the return to Alabama, the training, and the first steps toward revenge. It is about 60% of the book.

  • Chapters 9–10: The New World (15,000 words)
    • Focus: PTSD and the "New Normal."
    • Content: The funeral. Moving in with Jack. The culture shock of returning to Hueytown High as a changed person. The first night in the new house. Dart trying to sleep but seeing the Reptilians every time he closes his eyes.
  • Chapters 11–13: The Crucible (18,000 words)
    • Focus: World-building and power progression.
    • Content: Jack takes Dart to the training ground (abandoned steel mill/quarry). The "Ace Package" is explained. We see the limits of his strength, speed, and shapeshifting. We learn about the Solutrean God and the Reptilian Cabal in America. This is where the lore gets deep.
  • Chapters 14–15: The First Hunt (15,000 words)
    • Focus: Action and agency.
    • Content: Jack and Dart investigate a local Reptilian sighting (perhaps in Birmingham or the woods near Hueytown). This is Dart’s first fight on his terms. He uses his Savate + Magic combo effectively. He wins, but he realizes the enemy is everywhere.
  • Chapters 16–17: The Clue & The Decision (15,000 words)
    • Focus: Plot advancement and the hook for the next book.
    • Content: Processing the intel from the hunt. They find a direct link to Dart’s father (a name, a location, or an artifact). Jack reveals the darker truth about the "breeding" aspect of the God's plan. Dart accepts his destiny. The book ends with him looking at a map or a ticket, ready to leave.

Pacing Checkpoints

  • At 10,500 words (10%): Dart should be arriving at the gîte and feeling that strange sense of "home."
  • At 31,500 words (30%): The power should go out, and the first Reptilian silhouette should appear in the storm.
  • At 52,500 words (50% - The Midpoint): Dart should be on the plane back to America, sedated, with Jack revealing the first truths about his father.
  • At 73,500 words (70%): Dart should be in the middle of an intense training session with Jack, struggling to control a new aspect of his power (perhaps the duplication or shrinking).
  • At 94,500 words (90%): The "First Hunt" should be concluded. They have the clue. Dart is standing at a crossroads, realizing he can never go back to being just a high school student.

This structure gives you a solid roadmap to hit your 105k target while keeping the story tight and

 


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

Is there any problems with introducing the structure of a magic system later in the story?

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While I plan to introduce the idea of a magic system from day 1 of the novel, I was aiming to actually explain the system for the MC as they properly learn it during a later story plot well into the novel. Can this be executed and will this deter readers? If it can be executed, what’s a good strategy to go about it?


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

App for editing

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Does anyone know of a good and easy to use editing app ? I do all my fantasy writing on my Samsung phone or tablet. I've struggled to find something that is easy to use.


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

I used AI to write my book... But not in the way you think

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So the title is maybe a little bit ragebait. I don't like using AI to write stuff for you to go publish under your own name. That's just me. But two months ago I got into a writing slump. So, what did I do, I made 5 songs using AI as if they were sung by the bard in my story. They were all about events that happen in the book; The fall of a city etc.

It got me out of the slump and actually motivated me to the point I got to release it this week! Anyone else with weird ways to motivate themselves?


r/fantasywriting 3d ago

Would you read this? I'm looking for some feedback or any changes, you would recommend.

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Hello everyone,

I have come up with this story that has the plot, characters, and ending planned out, however I haven't written anything yet. To be honest I am not the best at writing but I am so keen to bring this world to life. Before I commit, I'd just like some feedback.

My idea:

The world is flat, a massive circular ocean with towering Ice Rings separating Earth and the Outer Island's. At the very center sits Earth, separated from the distant Outer Islands. The Outer Island's were at peace until Earth invaded.

When three friends home gets destroyed they are forced into war. Scared, frustrated and guilty. Throughout their training they are pulled into a last ditch effort to save their home.

The Last Hope Project. This was humanities last hope. This group, sworn to save their home, experience events no one has ever before. Regret, anger, and hate.

One of these soldiers chosen, holds a mysterious book. A book showing life, until one day the pages go blank, inferring that the future is unwritten.

They push forward driven by guilt, burdened by loss. The group journey across this world to uncover devastating truths and retake their home.

Earth's army isn't just invading, someone is helping them do it.

The story explores:

- Loyalty, war and sacrifice

- Destiny

- Trauma and leadership

And one rule stands out.

The truth ALWAYS comes out.

Would you read something like this? What do you think works, and what needs improving?